Monday, February 20, 2012

Is this the right way to internally cite


Is this the right way to internally cite?
Is this the right way to internally cite? Diabetes mellitus, characterized by the decreased carbohydrate metabolism due to decreased insulin resulting in high blood and urine glucose levels (Brunzel 267, Flynn and Whitlock 27), and diabetes insipidus, characterized by decreased synthesis of antidiuretic hormone or lack of renal tubular response to the hormone (Brunzel 268, Flynn and Whitlock 36), are two diseases that can also cause pale or colorless urine (Graff 10-12). Or should I explain the diseases in a separate sentence? Two diseases that cause pale or colorless urine are diabetes mellitus and diabetes insipidus (Graff 10-12). Diabetes mellitus characterized by the decreased carbohydrate metabolism due to decreased insulin resulting in high blood and urine glucose levels (Brunzel 267, Flynn and Whitlock 27). Diabetes insipidus is characterized by decreased sythesis of antidiuretic hormone or the lack of renal tubular response to the hormone (Brunzel 268, Flynn and Whitlock 36). My teacher said to describe the disease right after mentioning it, so I'm assuming that they have to be in the same sentence - or am I misinterpreting what she meant by "right after it"??
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the first one is correct






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